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Offline Tornado Firehooves

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Tales Fic (With G4 elements)
« on: June 08, 2014, 06:37:14 am »
Here's a Tales fic I wrote, called a royal respite; it features a crossover of the generations;

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/8160727/1/A-royal-Respite

Be warned, it takes a turn for the creepy later in the fic, and potrays the society of Tales in a slightly negative light (though not any of the main characters, they are all potrayed as good!)

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Re: Tales Fic (With G4 elements)
« Reply #1 on: June 08, 2014, 08:04:58 am »
I've only read the first chapter, and it's pretty good so far, in my opinion! But, if what I THINK happens ends up happening... I won't be the happiest customer. )8')

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Re: Tales Fic (With G4 elements)
« Reply #2 on: June 08, 2014, 10:57:40 am »
I'm on Chapter 4 and it's been pretty fun so far! Celestia has gone a bit mad I think though, lol! Interesting take on the different generations of MLP co-existing at the same time in different parts of the world like that.

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Re: Tales Fic (With G4 elements)
« Reply #3 on: June 09, 2014, 06:14:24 am »
Thanks everyone, I really hope you enjoy the rest of the story and let me know what you thought of it!  :)

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Re: Tales Fic (With G4 elements)
« Reply #4 on: June 10, 2014, 12:08:56 am »
Oh my god you named a pony Slipknot - I know it matches his symbol but was that also a reference to the band? Because that's all I can think about. ;)

It was a good read though, I enjoyed it! I have zero knowledge of any of the post-Tales ponies, but it was fine, the sisters were developed and explained well enough that I didn't have an issue following along. Plus you featured Ace quite a bit which made me super happy. I also rather enjoyed the idea of the Republic! I love a good dystopian setting in stories. :)

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Re: Tales Fic (With G4 elements)
« Reply #5 on: June 10, 2014, 11:04:52 pm »
Slipknot and the other boyfriends of the main seven were actually supposed to be the unamed colts from the tales episode  'roll around the clock'. And glad you like the story!  ;D

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Re: Tales Fic (With G4 elements)
« Reply #6 on: June 10, 2014, 11:06:49 pm »
Slipknot was supposed to be Star's boyfriend? Funny; I've always called him Looper myself.

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Re: Tales Fic (With G4 elements)
« Reply #7 on: June 11, 2014, 07:21:59 pm »
I always thought of him as Roper. XD Slipknot is way cooler!

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Re: Tales Fic (With G4 elements)
« Reply #8 on: July 20, 2014, 06:00:04 am »
Thanks guys! Glad you all liked it!  :D